What did the prompt ask you to do? Write a 4-6 page paper going beyond summarizing and analyzing, compare connections between the concepts of audience, rhetorical situation, and genre.
How did you approach the project? I didn’t prepare well enough for the paper
For draft projects, tell us where you are in the process of the project. I still have probably half of the paper to work on still. I need to add more details from the readings and remove repetition from the paper.
What do you like or not like about the project in its current state? I don’t like the amount of repetition in it currently.
What do you need peer reviewers to help you with the most? Anything.
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the main focus is your paper , would be audience. I liked how you incorporated many points of views. For instance you included your point of views , what you think the authors point of view was and the audiences point of view. You also incorporated personal experience which I also really liked. the only issues were run on sentences and repetition. You did not state the title of bazermans article when you were writing about it.how do bitzers ideas connect with analzaldas and bazermans?
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I think that this paper didn’t grab my attention as much as others. I would say work on the wording of some sentences, make it more interesting. that’s really what you need to work on, add more pieces into it like the definitions of the audience, genre, and rhetorical situation. that’s about it good job.
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